I drew this for a Portland comics anthology called
Stumptown Underground. The theme for last month's issue was "Flight". The excellent dialog is by Jacob Mercy. Thanks, Jackie!


Oh and
here's the alternate ending, which is funnier by most accounts but didn't win editorial approval.Superman is Copyright/TM DC Comics & Time-Warner Entertainment 2009, and is used here without permission or legal justification.
Critics of the alternate ending mainly argued that it took them a second glance to figure out what was going on in the last panel, and in that split second the gag was lost. I can understand that, and maybe at some point I'll make a color version that'll work better.
ReplyDeleteSuperman on top of her talk bubble, nice idea and execution.
ReplyDeleteReally great.
ReplyDeleteAfter more than a second glance, I'm still not sure what's happening in the last panel? He's throwing up? The published version works better.
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